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Edutest书面表达样题

示例:SelectiveReady中的Edutest奖学金考试,练习测试中的一道书面表达题
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和孩子一起读每个题目,再一起看我们的构思和范文开头。

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Edutest书面表达只有一道题,限时15分钟,没有单独的构思时间,所以构思必须快。下面八道样题覆盖全部六种文体,每道都附构思和范文开头。

Edutest · 10月24日

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  1. Edutest书面表达考什么?
  2. Edutest写作怎样评分?
  3. 八道附构思的样题
  4. 孩子应该怎样安排时间?
  5. 哪些错误失分最多?
  6. 孩子在家怎样练习?
  7. 这和ACER写作有什么不同?

Edutest书面表达考什么?

这是整场考试里孩子唯一要用自己的话作答的部分,也是时间最短的部分。它和阅读理解、数学同属学业测试,考查阅读理解、数学和书面表达的实际学业水平。

孩子有15分钟,没有单独的构思或阅读时间。读题、构思、写作和检查都要在这段时间里完成,所以快速构思比写得长更重要。

Edutest表示,写作题可能是创意、描写、记叙、议论、说明或信息类。六种文体都有可能出现,所以考前让孩子每种都写过。

容易混淆的文体

创意写作和故事听起来很像。故事需要完整的结构:开头、问题和结局。创意写作可以是故事、场景、信件或对话,只要用新颖的方式处理题目里的想法。

说明文和信息类写作也很接近。说明文解释原因和道理;信息类写作则按合理的顺序,告诉特定的读者需要知道的内容。

Edutest · 10月24日
六种文体,每种都有样题
文体孩子要做什么本页样题
创意写作把不寻常的想法写得真实可信Upside Down;My Shadow Quits
描写调动各种感官描绘场景,不需要情节The Kitchen Before a Big Lunch
故事讲述有问题、有结局的故事When the Power Went Out
说服文选定立场,用理由说服读者A Class Pet;One Change to the Playground
说明文解释事情如何发生、为什么发生Hard to Break
信息类写作按清楚的顺序给读者提供有用的信息A School Day Here

Edutest写作怎样评分?

按六项标准评分,远不止“故事写得好”。Edutest评估标点、创意、结构、语法、拼写和切题程度。文章生动但拼写错误很多,或者工整却跑题,都可能在家长意想不到的地方失分。

把背好的故事硬套到别的题目上,很容易被看出来,而切题程度正是Edutest列出的评分项。一篇贴合题目的新文章,比一篇精致却不切题的文章更稳妥。

你大概看不到写作的具体分数:成绩交给学校,不直接给家长。所以在家读孩子的练习文章,才是发现问题的地方。

Edutest · 10月24日
Edutest评估什么,在家怎样检查
评分项在文章里是什么样读回时快速检查
标点句号、逗号、大写字母和引号用对位置大声读:每处停顿都有标点吗?
创意读者想不到的新角度或细节有没有你以前没见过的想法?
结构分段清楚,顺序合理,有真正的开头和结尾孩子能说出每段的作用吗?
语法句子完整,时态一致,搭配正确有没有连成一串的长句或时态混乱?
拼写常用词和较难的词都拼写正确把孩子拿不准的词都圈出来
切题按这个题目、这种文体来写陌生人能从文章猜出题目吗?

八道附构思的样题

和孩子一起读每个题目,再一起看我们的构思和范文开头。问问孩子会怎样开头,我们的开头又好在哪里。

这些题目是我们按Edutest写作题的风格和篇幅编写的,覆盖全部六种文体,不是Edutest的考题。每张卡片都直接列出题目、孩子可以怎样写的几种思路、高分作文的特点、简短的构思、范文开头,以及它好在哪里。题目为英文,解析为中文。

题目为英文原题

讲解示例 1

Upside Down

Upside Down

One morning you wake up and find that everything in your house is upside down: the furniture, the pictures, even the water in the fish tank. Everything except you.

Write a creative piece about that morning.

Write a creative piece about that morning.

  • Describe breakfast as the cereal pours up out of the bowl
  • Show how a family member reacts when they find you
  • Decide whether the house flips back or you learn to live with it

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  • A clear sequence of a few moments, not a long list of objects
  • Sensory details that make an impossible situation easy to picture
  • A character who reacts and makes a choice, so something actually happens
  • 人物:我,再加一位家人来作出反应
  • 3个时刻:卧室、早餐、前门
  • 最精彩的细节:麦片往上掉,鱼在天花板上游
  • 感受:先困惑,再好奇,最后变得勇敢
  • 结尾:我把自己也翻过来,或者一切又翻回原样

The first thing I noticed was the light. It was coming from the floor, because the window was now near my feet, and my bedside lamp was hanging from the ceiling like a sleepy bat.

孩子要抓住一个奇怪的设定,用细致又出人意料的细节让它显得真实。好的作文会挑几个生动的时刻(吃早餐、穿衣服、打开前门)来写,而不是把所有倒过来的东西逐一列出,最后还要有一个令人满意的结尾。

讲解示例 2

The Kitchen Before a Big Lunch

The Kitchen Before a Big Lunch

Picture a kitchen in the hour before a large family lunch, with many people cooking at once.

Describe the scene so a reader can see, hear and smell it.

Describe the scene so a reader can see, hear and smell it.

  • Zoom in on one cook at the stove, then pull back to the whole room
  • Capture the sounds of chopping, sizzling and people talking over each other
  • End with the moment the first guests arrive

15

  • Precise nouns and verbs (simmering, clattering) instead of 'nice' and 'good'
  • All five senses used, with each paragraph focused on one area or sense
  • Figurative language used sparingly and well, such as one fresh simile
  • 视觉:蒸汽、摆满东西的台面、手上的面粉
  • 听觉:滋滋声、切菜声、三段对话同时进行
  • 嗅觉:大蒜、烤肉或烤蔬菜、正在烤的甜点
  • 触觉:烤箱的热气、黏手的面团
  • 气氛:忙碌但开心;以门铃声结尾

Every surface in the kitchen was busy. Onions hissed in a pan by the window, a pot of rice rattled its lid like it wanted to escape, and somewhere under the noise my aunt was humming.

这道题要的是描写,不是讲故事:孩子要把一个忙碌的场景写得细致丰富。好的作文会依次调动各种感官,营造出温暖又忙乱的氛围,不需要情节。

讲解示例 3

When the Power Went Out

When the Power Went Out

Halfway through a school day, the power goes out across the whole school and does not come back for the rest of the afternoon.

Write a story about what happened in your classroom.

Write a story about what happened in your classroom.

  • Show your class in the first minute after the lights and fans stop
  • Let an unexpected classmate come up with a plan
  • Finish with the school day ending without a bell

15

  • A clear structure: setting, problem, rising action and resolution
  • One or two characters who are shown through what they say and do
  • Dialogue that is punctuated correctly and moves the story along
  • 背景:数学课,炎热的下午,灯突然灭了
  • 问题:没有屏幕,没有铃声,本来还要考试
  • 转折:全班想出自己的办法来学习或玩
  • 人物:一个平时安静的同学原来是领头人
  • 结尾:用手摇铃宣布放学;谁都不想让灯再亮起来

The ceiling fan slowed, wobbled and stopped. For a moment the only sound in 6K was Arjun's pencil, still scratching away, because Arjun never noticed anything until it was too late.

孩子需要写一个真正的故事,有开头、问题和结尾,场景就在一间普通的教室里。好的作文会利用停电制造一个挑战或惊喜,并写出人物如何应对。

讲解示例 4

A Class Pet

A Class Pet

"Every primary school classroom should have a class pet."

Do you agree or disagree? Write a persuasive piece to convince your reader.

Do you agree or disagree? Write a persuasive piece to convince your reader.

  • Explain what a feeding and cleaning roster would teach a class
  • Describe how a pet might help a nervous student settle in
  • Answer worries about holidays, allergies or the animal's care

15

  • A clear position stated early and held all the way through
  • Each reason in its own paragraph, backed by a specific example
  • A fair answer to the opposing view, which makes the argument stronger
  • 立场:赞成(或反对),第一行就说明
  • 理由1:培养责任感(喂食值日表)
  • 理由2:让学生安静下来/帮助害羞的孩子
  • 回应反方:假期怎么办、过敏问题
  • 结论:重申观点,用一句有力的话结尾

Imagine walking into class on a Monday morning and being greeted not by a whiteboard, but by a guinea pig squeaking for breakfast. Every primary classroom should have a class pet, because a small animal can teach lessons no textbook can.

孩子要很快选定立场,用清楚的理由和例子来论证。好的作文会在开头几行就亮明观点,展开两三个充分的理由,最后用一个有力的结论收尾。

讲解示例 5

Hard to Break

Hard to Break

Many people have a habit they would like to stop, such as pressing the snooze button or leaving things until the last minute.

Explain why habits can be so hard to break, and what might help.

Explain why habits can be so hard to break, and what might help.

  • Explain why a habit can happen without you even thinking
  • Use an everyday example, like the snooze button, to show each cause
  • Suggest two or three practical ways to change a habit

15

  • A clear explanation of causes, not just a list of habits
  • Relatable examples that make each point concrete
  • Linking words that show cause and effect (because, as a result, so)
  • 引言:人人都有一个;举个简单的例子
  • 原因1:习惯是自动进行的,不需要思考
  • 原因2:好处马上就有,代价以后才来
  • 有帮助的做法:换一个习惯、让它变难、告诉朋友
  • 结论:改变很慢,但做得到

Almost everyone has a habit they wish they could switch off. Mine is reaching for one more biscuit, even when I am not hungry, and the reason it is so hard to stop says a lot about how our brains work.

说明文是解释一个观点,而不是为某一方辩护或讲故事。好的作文会结合日常例子讲清原因,再按合理的顺序提出改掉习惯的可行办法。

讲解示例 6

A School Day Here

A School Day Here

A student from another country is coming to stay with your family and will spend a week at your school.

Write a piece that tells them what a normal school day is like, from arriving in the morning to going home.

Write a piece that tells them what a normal school day is like, from arriving in the morning to going home.

  • Walk your visitor through the day in time order
  • Explain words they might not know, such as recess or assembly
  • Tell them what to bring and who to ask for help

15

  • A clear time order with headings or paragraph topics for each part of the day
  • Explanations of local words a newcomer would not know
  • Facts stated precisely (times, places, what to bring)
  • 读者:海外来的访客,对我们学校一无所知
  • 早上:到校时间、书包架、点名
  • 中间:上课、课间休息、午餐规定、戴帽规定
  • 下午:体育课或图书馆课,放学
  • 小贴士:要带什么、找谁帮忙

Welcome to Riverbend Public School! A school day here starts at 8:50 am, but most students arrive about fifteen minutes early to drop their bags on the racks outside their classroom.

信息类写作要条理清楚地给读者提供有用、准确的信息。好的作文会按时间顺序展开,解释新来的人不知道的事情(比如 recess、校服或集会),语气友好、清楚。

讲解示例 7

My Shadow Quits

My Shadow Quits

Your shadow has decided it no longer wants to follow you around.

Write a creative piece about what happens next.

Write a creative piece about what happens next.

  • Give your shadow a reason for quitting and a voice of its own
  • Show what goes wrong when people notice you have no shadow
  • Work out a deal that brings your shadow back

15

  • An original take on the idea, with a shadow that has a clear personality
  • Humour or surprise that comes from specific, well-chosen details
  • Correctly punctuated dialogue if the shadow speaks
  • 它为什么辞职:受够了被人踩
  • 它的个性:爱发牢骚、夸张、好笑
  • 问题:别人发现我没有影子
  • 转折:我和它讨价还价,或者去追它
  • 结尾:谈妥条件,这一次它走在我前面

The letter was waiting on my pillow, written in grey pencil so faint I nearly missed it. It said: Dear You, I have followed you for eleven years. I quit.

这道题邀请孩子玩味一个不寻常的想法,可以写成故事、一个场景,甚至是和影子的一段对话。好的作文会给影子鲜明的个性和离开的理由,并用巧妙或温暖的方式收尾。

讲解示例 8

One Change to the Playground

One Change to the Playground

Your principal has asked students for ideas to make the school playground better.

Write a letter to your principal persuading them to make one change.

Write a letter to your principal persuading them to make one change.

  • Choose one change and say exactly what and where it would be
  • Give reasons a principal cares about, such as safety and cost
  • Finish with a polite, clear request

15

  • Correct letter form: greeting, clear paragraphs and a polite sign-off
  • One well-chosen change, explained precisely rather than several vague wishes
  • Reasons that suit the reader, such as safety, cost and benefit to all students
  • 改变:例如一个有遮阴的安静阅读角
  • 理由1:照顾不参加体育活动的同学
  • 理由2:夏天有遮阴,学生更安全
  • 回应顾虑:费用(旧长椅、家长义务劳动日)
  • 结尾:礼貌地提出请求并致谢

Dear Ms Okafor, thank you for asking students how to improve our playground. I would like to suggest one change that would help almost every student at our school: a shaded quiet corner beside the library.

孩子要选一个具体、现实的改变,并说服一位真实的读者——校长——这件事值得做。好的作文会用书信格式,给出校长在意的理由(安全、公平、费用),语气礼貌而坚定。

孩子应该怎样安排时间?

简短构思,分段写,留一点时间检查。没有单独的构思时间,构思就要占用写作时间,但简短的构思仍然值得:像我们的样题构思那样每行写几个词,就能避免文章跑偏。

  1. 题目读两遍

    圈出指令词:describe、persuade、explain、tell。这个词决定文体,而文体又决定结构。

  2. 用几行构思

    写谁或写什么、主要情节或理由,以及结尾。现在就定好结尾,文章才有方向。

  3. 分段写

    开头用一句能吸引读者的话,就像范文开头那样。每段只做一件事。

  4. 留时间检查

    最后留出时间检查拼写、标点和漏掉的词。这些都是Edutest的评分项。

写短一点没关系:一篇有清楚结尾的完整文章,比写到一半就停下的长文章读起来更好。

哪些错误失分最多?

短篇写作失分,可能来自下面几种习惯。拿孩子的练习文章对照下面检查一遍。

  • 题目要求别的文体,却写成故事。 The Kitchen Before a Big Lunch要的是场景,不是冒险。
  • 罗列而不是挑选。 Upside Down容易让孩子把每样倒过来的东西都列一遍;写好几个时刻就够了。
  • 立场摇摆。 开头几行就选定立场并坚持到底。回应一次反方观点会让论证更有力;中途换立场则会削弱论证。
  • “原来是一场梦”。 把故事一笔勾销的结尾显得仓促。先定好结尾就能避免。
  • 没留时间检查。 拼写、标点和语法都是Edutest的评分项,快速读一遍能发现很多小错。

孩子在家怎样练习?

每周写一道题,轮换文体,就能养成快速构思的习惯。每写完一篇,挑一处下次要改的地方。

Edutest自己的练习卷包括语言推理、数字推理、阅读理解和数学,不含写作,所以作文练习需要另找材料。

我们的练习测试包括书面表达(界面为英文),按Edutest的时间进行,并按评分维度给出分档反馈。这些反馈是由AI撰写的练习反馈,可能有误或不完整,也不是Edutest、ACER或任何学校的评分,请把它当作练习参考。

练习测试1免费,并且免费练习测试的写作题可获得AI写作反馈。

Edutest · 10月24日SelectiveReady · 10月24日

这和ACER写作有什么不同?

有些学校用ACER而不是Edutest,写作部分的安排不一样。ACER有两个题目,各25分钟,便于学生使用不同的写作风格。Edutest只有一道题,限时15分钟,没有单独的构思时间。

如果孩子两种考试都可能参加,请看ACER书面表达样题。Edutest其他测试也有样题页面:语言推理、数字推理、阅读理解和数学。

ACER · 10月24日Edutest · 10月24日

了解孩子目前的水平

练习测试1会批改每一道题,并按技能显示结果:孩子已经掌握的部分,以及接下来要练的三项技能。

示例:SelectiveReady中的Edutest奖学金考试,练习后的分技能成绩示例

按真实考试来练习

练习测试1免费。之后每个考试的练习包A$109起,使用12个月;或每周A$9。

资料来源与核查

  1. Edutest: scholarship and entrance testingEdutest · 事实核查 2026年10月24日
  2. Edutest: important informationEdutest · 事实核查 2026年10月24日
  3. Edutest: online practice testsEdutest · 事实核查 2026年10月24日
  4. SelectiveReadySelectiveReady · 事实核查 2026年11月2日
  5. ACER Scholarship Tests: secondary levels (1, 2 and 3)ACER (Australian Council for Educational Research) · 事实核查 2026年10月24日

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