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ACER书面表达样题

示例:SelectiveReady中的ACER奖学金考试,练习测试中的一道写作1题
示例

和孩子一起读一组题目,再看看我们为每道题写的构思和范文开头。

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ACER书面表达有两个写作题目,各25分钟,孩子要展示的是不同的写法,而不只是写好一篇。下面是我们编写的八道样题,分成四组,每道都附有构思和范文开头。

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  1. ACER书面表达考什么?
  2. ACER看重写作的什么?
  3. 四组共八道样题
  4. 孩子怎样理解开放式题目?
  5. 孩子应该怎样安排时间?
  6. 能提前准备好文章吗?
  7. 孩子在家怎样练习?
  8. 这和Edutest写作有什么不同?

ACER书面表达考什么?

它是ACER奖学金考试的写作部分:两个题目,各25分钟,目的是让学生用不同风格来写。这些考试全澳用于为奖学金申请人排名;Level 1面向入读七年级或八年级的学生,除写作外还有人文和数学。

在我们的练习测试中,写作1是开头部分,写作2排在人文和数学之后,是最后部分。第二篇是在孩子已经疲惫时写的,这一点值得专门练习。

因为题目是为了让学生展示不同风格,我们把样题写成开放式的。每道题给出标题、观点陈述或用文字描述的图片,由孩子决定写成故事、反思文、描写还是说服文。

ACER · 10月24日ACER · 11月4日
写作在我们ACER练习测试中的位置
部分题量和时间孩子要做什么
写作125分钟写第一个题目,选适合它的写法
人文40分钟内40–45道选择题根据文字和图像材料做选择题
数学40分钟内32–36道选择题选择题
写作225分钟写第二个题目,换一种风格
ACER · 10月24日

ACER看重写作的什么?

看重想法,而不是篇幅。ACER表示想法比篇幅更重要;先花几分钟构思。它还规定:针对题目的原创思考,而不是事先准备好的文章。

所以,把清楚、有思考的想法写透,比堆满几页情节更有价值。把背好的范文硬套到题目上,反而对孩子不利;很多补习班教的套用模板,在这里帮不上忙。

ACER · 11月4日
什么对ACER作文有帮助,什么没有
有帮助没帮助
想法对题目有原创的角度,并贯穿全文最先想到、最显而易见的理解
篇幅足以展开想法,再有真正的结尾为了显得充实而写满几页
准备积累可以灵活运用的经历和技巧把背好的文章硬套到题目上
构思简短构思:角度、写法和结尾马上动笔,指望边写边想出来
两篇作文风格不同,比如故事和说服文两篇读起来差不多

四组共八道样题

题目成组出现,和真实考试一样;考试中每个题目有25分钟。和孩子一起读一组,聊聊每篇适合用什么写法。

每组的安排和我们练习测试中的写作部分一样:先是写作1的题目,再是方向不同的写作2题目。这些是我们自己编写的题目,不是ACER的考题。题目为英文,解析为中文。

每张卡片都直接列出题目、孩子可以怎样回应的几种思路、高分作文的特点、构思、范文开头,以及它好在哪里。

题目为英文原题

讲解示例 1

Halfway There

Pair 1 · Writing 1 · 25 minutes

Halfway There

Write in response to this title. You may write a story, a reflection or a persuasive piece. Respond in whatever way you think is most appropriate.

Halfway There

  • Tell the story of someone stopped halfway up, through or along something
  • Show the moment a character decides whether to keep going
  • Reflect on a time you were halfway through something hard

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  • An original interpretation of the title, held through the whole piece
  • A focused moment rather than a whole day or a whole life
  • Thoughts and feelings that change, so the piece has a shape
  • 这里的“halfway”指什么?(骑车、爬山、一个目标)
  • 选择形式:写一个关于转折点的故事
  • 人物想放弃;为什么?
  • 转折时刻:一件小事改变了主意
  • 结尾:到达终点,或者决定走到一半就够了
  • 最后一句呼应标题

The sign at the lookout said 4.2 km to the summit and 4.2 km back to the car park, which meant I was exactly halfway, and exactly as far from giving up as I was from finishing.

开放式标题奖励那些能很快想清楚它对自己意味着什么的孩子:一段停在中途的旅程、一个做了一半的项目,或是决定要不要继续的那一刻。好的作文会让“halfway”真正重要,让标题显得不可或缺,而不是随手加上的。

讲解示例 2

The Questions We Ask

Pair 1 · Writing 2 · 25 minutes

The Questions We Ask

"The questions we ask say more about us than the answers we give."

Write in response to this statement. You may agree, disagree, reflect on it or tell a story that explores it.

The Questions We Ask

  • Think about what a question like 'Are you okay?' shows about the person asking
  • Tell a story where someone's question reveals who they really are
  • Explain when answers might matter more than questions

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  • A clear point of view on the statement, even if it is a balanced one
  • Specific, everyday examples that make an abstract idea concrete
  • Willingness to admit a limit or exception, which shows mature thinking
  • 我同意吗?大体同意,但有一个例外
  • 例子1:小孩子问“为什么?”,体现好奇心
  • 例子2:问“你还好吗?”,体现善良
  • 但是:答案能体现我们知道什么、学到了什么
  • 结论:问题显示我们是谁,答案显示我们知道什么

My little cousin asks about forty questions a day, and not one of them is about getting the right answer. 'Why is the moon following the car?' tells you far more about her than any answer she could give.

在一个适合写故事的标题之后,这一组的第二个题目鼓励思辨性写作:孩子可以反思一个人提的问题透露了什么(好奇、担心、善良),也可以讲一个故事来表现这一点。好的作文会用真实的例子去检验这个观点,而不是简单重复它。

讲解示例 3

The Kite in the Tree

Pair 2 · Writing 1 · 25 minutes

The Kite in the Tree

The picture shows a bright red kite tangled high in the branches of a tall gum tree. Below, a child holds the loose string and looks up. Beside them, an older person is pointing, not at the kite, but at something further up in the sky that we cannot see.

Write in response to the picture. You may write a story, a description or a reflection. Respond in whatever way you think is most appropriate.

The Kite in the Tree

  • Decide what the older person has spotted in the sky
  • Show how the two people get along through what they say and do
  • Write from the child's point of view as their mood changes

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  • Clear use of the picture's details, including the unexplained pointing
  • A relationship between characters shown through small actions and dialogue
  • Vivid setting details (the gum tree, the wind, the colour against the sky)
  • 他们是谁?祖辈和孙辈
  • 问题:风筝卡住了,孩子很难过
  • 谜团:他们指的是一只盘旋的楔尾雕
  • 转变:孩子忘了风筝,抬头观看
  • 结尾:孩子松开线,继续望着天空(不直接说出道理)

The kite had been ours for exactly eleven minutes when the wind snatched it and hung it in the top of the gum tree, a red flag on a branch I could never reach.

这道看图写作题给出了一个开场画面和一个谜团:那位年长的人在指什么?好的作文会用上图中给出的细节,解开或巧妙处理这个谜团,并围绕两个人之间的关系写成故事或感想。

讲解示例 4

A Little Boredom

Pair 2 · Writing 2 · 25 minutes

A Little Boredom

Being bored now and then is good for children.

Write in response to this statement. You may argue for or against it, reflect on your own experience, or tell a story that explores it.

A Little Boredom

  • Argue that boredom pushes children to invent their own fun
  • Describe a rainy day or long trip when boredom led somewhere good
  • Explain when a little boredom turns into too much

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  • A position that is clear from the start and developed, not just stated
  • A personal example used as evidence, not as a separate story
  • Recognition of the opposing view and a reasoned reply to it
  • 立场:同意,无聊能激发想法
  • 理由1:它逼你自己想办法找乐子
  • 理由2:它培养耐心
  • 另一方:太多无聊就是浪费时间
  • 个人例子:一个什么都没安排的假期
  • 收尾:一点点无聊,而不是很多

Some of the best afternoons of my life began with the words 'There's nothing to do.' Being bored now and then is good for children, because boredom is where most of our own ideas begin.

这一组把看图写故事和一个适合议论或反思的题目搭配在一起。好的作文会表明立场,用真实经历(下雨的假期、漫长的车程)来支撑,并诚实地回应另一方的观点。

讲解示例 5

Beginner or Expert

Pair 3 · Writing 1 · 25 minutes

Beginner or Expert

It is better to be a beginner at many things than an expert at one.

Write in response to this statement. You may argue for or against it, reflect on it, or tell a story that explores it.

Beginner or Expert

  • Compare trying lots of hobbies with getting really good at one
  • Use an example from sport, music or school that you know well
  • Take a middle position: try many things, then choose one

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  • A clear stance that engages with both halves of the statement
  • Examples drawn from real activities a child knows well
  • Reasoning that explains why, not just what
  • 立场:不同意,深度更重要
  • 理由1:成为专家后能帮助和教别人
  • 理由2:坚持一件事能培养毅力
  • 承认另一方:多尝试才能找到属于你的那一件
  • 结论:多尝试,然后选一件去精通

I have been a beginner at piano, soccer, chess and juggling, and an expert at none of them. That is exactly why I disagree with this statement: being a beginner is fun, but it is not where the best rewards are found.

孩子要在两件都不错的事情之间权衡,所以没有显而易见的正确立场。好的作文会选择一方,或者一个经过思考的中间立场,并用爱好、体育、音乐或学校中的例子来支撑。

讲解示例 6

Following the Footprints

Pair 3 · Writing 2 · 25 minutes

Following the Footprints

Write in response to this title. You may write a story, a description or a reflection. Respond in whatever way you think is most appropriate.

Following the Footprints

  • Follow a trail of real footprints in sand, mud or frost
  • Build suspense as the trail leads somewhere unexpected
  • Reflect on a person whose example you have followed

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  • A clear interpretation of the title, literal or figurative
  • Suspense built through pace: short sentences at key moments
  • Precise details that let the reader follow the trail too
  • 写实还是比喻?写实:学校操场霜地上的脚印
  • 谁留下的?小小的、光着脚,通向小卖部
  • 制造好奇:脚印在一面墙前突然消失
  • 发现:一只迷路的负鼠,或者低年级同学的游戏
  • 结尾:联系到“追随别人的脚步”

The frost on the oval was perfect, white and unbroken, except for one line of small footprints that started in the middle of nowhere and headed straight for the canteen.

在一篇议论文之后,这个标题适合写故事或反思类文章。脚印可以是真实的(沙滩、泥地或霜地上的),也可以比喻追随某人的榜样;好的作文会作出明确的选择,并围绕它营造悬念或意义。

讲解示例 7

Putting It Off

Pair 4 · Writing 1 · 25 minutes

Putting It Off

"Nothing feels quite as heavy as the thing you keep putting off."

Write in response to this statement. You may tell a story, reflect on your own experience, or argue for or against it.

Putting It Off

  • Tell the story of someone avoiding an apology or a hard job
  • Show how the put-off task feels heavier day by day
  • Reflect on why people delay the things that matter

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  • A clear link between the quotation and the events or ideas
  • Feelings shown through actions and thoughts, not just named
  • A build-up that makes the final action feel like a release
  • 被拖延的事:归还一件借来却弄坏了的东西
  • 表现沉重:吃晚饭时、躺在床上时都在想
  • 借口:三个不同的拖延理由
  • 行动时刻:敲响邻居家的门
  • 结尾:如释重负,事情比担心的小

Mr Delaney's hedge trimmer had been in our garage for nineteen days, and for eighteen of those days it had been broken. Every time I walked past it, it seemed to get heavier.

这句话适合写一个人逃避某项任务、一次道歉或一场艰难谈话的故事,也可以反思我们为什么会拖延。好的作文会通过感受和小动作表现这份“沉重”,并让人物最终采取行动。

讲解示例 8

What They Can See

Pair 4 · Writing 2 · 25 minutes

What They Can See

The picture shows the inside of a crowded city bus. Every passenger, young and old, has turned to look out of the same window with a surprised expression. One person is half-standing to get a better view. We cannot see what is outside.

Write in response to the picture. You may write a story, a description, a persuasive piece or a reflection. Respond in whatever way you think is most appropriate.

What They Can See

  • Describe the moment from one passenger's point of view
  • Decide whether to reveal what is outside or keep it a mystery
  • Reflect on how one surprise can make strangers talk

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  • Close use of the picture's details: the crowd, the shared window, the half-standing passenger
  • A strong point of view that lets the reader experience the moment
  • Rich, precise description of people's faces and reactions
  • 选择:从一位乘客的视角描写这一刻
  • 之前:乘客们百无聊赖,人人都在看手机
  • 那一刻:表情、声音、有人站了起来
  • 揭晓:一个热气球降落在公园里
  • 之后:陌生人难得地互相交谈起来

Until 4:17 that afternoon, the number 44 bus was the quietest place in the city. Then a woman near the back gasped, and thirty heads turned to the left at once, as though someone had pulled a string.

这幅图的核心是一个看不见的东西,所以很考验想象力:孩子可以讲故事,从一位乘客的视角描写这一刻,或者反思是什么让陌生人共同经历一件事。好的作文要么以令人满意的方式揭开这个惊喜,要么有意隐藏它来制造效果。

ACER · 10月24日

孩子怎样理解开放式题目?

先想清楚题目对自己意味着什么。Halfway There可以是骑车骑到半路停下,可以是做到一半的项目,也可以是要不要继续下去的选择。标题和内容紧密相关,文章才有力;只在结尾硬加上标题,效果就差很多。

  1. 找角度

    想想题目字面上和引申开来分别可以指什么,选孩子最有话可说的那种理解。

  2. 选写法

    故事、反思文、描写或说服文。让角度来决定,并且要和另一篇不同。

  3. 用好给出的内容

    如果是图片,要用上它的细节,包括没有解释的地方。如果是观点陈述,先想清楚孩子在多大程度上同意。

  4. 先定结尾

    动笔前就知道文章落在哪里。最后一句呼应标题,全文就连起来了。

观点陈述需要立场,但不必是简单的同意或反对。像The Questions We Ask的构思那样,有立场,同时承认一处例外,可能更能体现思考。

孩子应该怎样安排时间?

先简单构思,再动笔。ACER建议写之前先列个简短的提纲。 每个题目有25分钟,足够展开想法,但不够推倒重来,所以构思是对文章的保护。

可行的安排是:先定角度和写法,简单记下主要情节或理由,大部分时间用来写,最后留几分钟通读,检查意思和小错。

写第二个题目时,孩子容易重复第一篇奏效的写法。有意换一种写法,才能体现这些题目要考查的不同风格:如果写作1写的是故事,写作2可以写说服文或反思文。

ACER · 11月4日ACER · 10月24日

能提前准备好文章吗?

不能准备整篇文章。ACER要求针对题目进行原创思考,不能是事先准备好的文章。

可以准备的,是能用于任何题目的东西:真实经历的积累(长途旅行、犯过的错、改变主意的时刻),几种技巧(有力的开头、对话、呼应标题的结尾),以及对每种写法的熟悉。

ACER更广泛的建议是广泛阅读,批判性思考。阅读直接滋养写作:读完故事或评论文章后,可以问问孩子作者想说什么,自己会不会反驳。

ACER · 11月4日

孩子在家怎样练习?

每周练一组效果不错:两个题目都计时写,然后一起读一遍。先问想法和结尾,再看拼写。ACER把想法放在首位,在家给反馈也应如此。

我们的练习测试包括两篇作文,按评分维度给出分档反馈。这些反馈是由AI撰写的练习反馈,可能有误或不完整,也不是Edutest、ACER或任何学校的评分,请把它当作练习参考,并结合你自己的阅读判断。

注册免费账户,免费练习测试的写作题可获得AI写作反馈,你可以先看看孩子自己作文的反馈,再决定要不要付费(界面为英文)。

SelectiveReady · 10月24日

这和Edutest写作有什么不同?

ACER的时间更长,而且有两个题目。Edutest的写作只有一道题,限时15分钟,没有单独的构思时间。如果你考虑的学校使用Edutest,请看Edutest书面表达样题。

ACER其他测试也有样题页面:ACER人文样题和ACER数学样题。

Edutest · 10月24日

了解孩子目前的水平

练习测试1会批改每一道题,并按技能显示结果:孩子已经掌握的部分,以及接下来要练的三项技能。

示例:SelectiveReady中的ACER奖学金考试,练习后的分技能成绩示例

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  3. ACER Scholarships: parentsACER (Australian Council for Educational Research) · 事实核查 2026年11月4日
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  5. Edutest: scholarship and entrance testingEdutest · 事实核查 2026年10月24日

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